by Jayhawk » Tue Mar 23, 2010 9:48 pm
Your two recent drawings, and your last one especially shows a lot of improvement! The sensitivity to the values of the face is really apparent, and the highlights are nicely done as well (and done correctly).
The light contour lines on the nose and lips work well, but around the face and under the chin the lines get a little heavy-handed. Also, the eyes could use a little more definition in value--the rest of the drawing shows such a nice range of light and dark, and the eyes should get the same treatment!
You've come a long way in only a few months, so I just say keep drawing and show us your progress!